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19 July 2011

In The Cool of The Morning (Notes)

I, don't wanna know your name
'Cause you don't look the same
The way you did before
(The Sweet. “Fox On The Run.” Capitol Records, 1974)

I wish it didn't take 3 days to write 1,100+ words. :P

That must have been the hardest part of this project to write, especially when half way through, I realized these characters would not work with the direction this project is going. So, in their first appearance, I wrote them out of the story. Sure, it was kind of a jerk move, but I put a lot of time into it and didn't just want to delete it.

Will they be key characters? No. Will they show up again? Maybe. I'd already removed what had turned into “Abigail and Shen's Exposition Theater” that threatened to go way too long, so it may be used if I feel further explanation is needed. If they don't... Well, if you liked them, they lived happily ever after. If you didn't, then  they died in a horrible train accident screw you they found the kind of happiness that only comes along once on in a hundred years! :P

All for now.

With luck, this train wreck will continue next week...

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